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Post by vampqueen13 on Mar 30, 2014 9:01:24 GMT -5
Character Name: Ivory Lance Phoenix
Nickname: Ivy
Age: 16
Faction: Dauntless
Transfer?: Transfer from Candor
Divergent?: Yes, Candor, Amity, Dauntless and Abnegation
. The day of the Aptitude text arrived...finally. I had waited for this day forever. Next thing I know I'm being whisked away to the testing room. It was plain grey with a chair & the person giving the test. I honestly had no idea what was about to happen. The person giving the test said his name was Franchise. He started the testing almost right away. But before it actually had begun he told me the results could determine my fate but I could still pick another faction if I chose. He reminded me about " faction before blood." Which he didn't have any need to because I've been told this before." Franchise put the suction cup like dots to my head with the wire hanging off them. I was transported to a room. An unknown voice spoke " choose." " why do I need to choose?" I asked confused." 10.9.8.7.6.5 I picked up the cheese. The other choice was the knife. 4.3.2.1 I heard a vicious growl. I spun around on my heels. Right before me was a canine. He growled at me running towards me. I threw the cheese. The dog ran. The dog came back, I scratched behind its ears. All the sudden I was on a bus. A man was holding a newspaper. "Do you know this man." The guy asked me. "Yes I do." I spoke confidently. "You can help me,help me." "What do you want me to help you with?" "He's trying to kill me." The guy looked around his eyes wild." "Another guy came up. It was Michael Upward the dude from the newspaper. He pulled a gun. I pulled a dagger that I thought of out of my pocket. Wow that was weird I thought. The Michael character aimed his gun at me. I stabbed him with the knife. Everything vanished I was back in the plain grey room. "Your result came back." "What did I get?" "Your result came back inconclusive." "Right so what does that mean?" "No wonder you didn't get Erudite!" Franchise exclaimed. "Explain." I deadpanned. "Your something called Divergent. Meaning your result was Candor,Amity,Daughtless & Abnegation." "People can't find out not even family." "If people find out your penalty could be death or you could be tortured." "I got it I could die & don't tell anyone about my result." "I will be putting your result in the system as Amity." "You can choose any faction you want." "Remember what you choose is your fate." "Have a good day choose wisely." That was the end of the test. )
Choosing Ceremony: (Please role play your character's choosing ceremony. At least 5 sentences per paragraph. At least 3 paragraphs.)
Appearance: (Write out a description of your character's appearance. At least 5 sentences per paragraph. At least one paragraph.)
Personality: (Write out a description of your character's personality. At least 5 sentences per paragraph. At least 2 paragraphs.)
History: (Write about your character's history and family. At least 5 sentences per paragraph. At least 2 paragraphs.)
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Post by camphalfblood101 on Mar 30, 2014 12:27:48 GMT -5
Under "Divergent" you said Candor twice.
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